[rae sanders]

"They were told to watch me, for I would strike the ones who has hurt me in the past. They have all failed to watch, for each blink, I was gone. And now I have taken another life blindfolded. My revenge has sought its prey and eaten well."

Well, I certainly been having fun with oekaki, I finally realized how to shade good enough my happiness, look at his hair! See, it is shaded good!

Well, he is something, he is blindfolded because if he opens his eyes figthing, lets just say it gets destructive X3.
Mods, if the little bit of blood is to much, I will take it off.

[LORDSORGHUM]

Some constructive criticism, if I may: You might want to change seek to sought and ate to eaten in the description, unless it's a quote or can't be changed for some reason; also perhaps remove the blood, we don't want this to get locked :3
I Like the drawing! It seems very.... dark...

[rae sanders]

I believe the blood is alright, it isn't exclusive and a lot of it.
And thank you. I realized my mistakes in his quote right before you posted, and I decided to wait XD

[LORDSORGHUM]

Well yesh, glad I could help, the passage seems to read so much.... smoother now... XD

[rae sanders]

Haha That's good

[rae sanders]

Bump :3