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This is my first Oekaki. I know...It's terrible....I draw Manga soooo much better with a pencil and paper. Well I'd love critiqueing if you'd like to give a beginner some suggestions.

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I'm not much better than you, but I would suggest shading it a bit and making the face and shoulders just a bit rounder, but other than that, good job!

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Thanks, Yeah I just realized I forgot to shade it.

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Wow! This actually got a few likes! Makes me happy

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lol sadly its probebly better than i can do, i would suggest using layers =P If u go to the box on the bottom right it will say add layer. each layer is on top of the other. so u can do lines lets say in layer 3, coloring on layer 2, and a background in layer 1. it makes it so much easier

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O.K. Thanks I'll make sure to do that next Oekaki I do.

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