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"It's here!" a man called to his men. They grabbed her. She struggled out of their grip, screaming, yelling. They threw her into the van and headed for the lab.

Once they had arrived, they took her from the van and threw her in a room. She didn't fight any more. She sat there, crying. Phoena feared them.

Phoena (Pheena) walked to the corner of her confinement room to grab a sharp piece of... something and walked to the wall. She scratched a line. "My first day here..." she muttered. She sat, looking around her room. Not a bed. No food. No water.

Eleven days had passed since Phoena had been in confinement. You heard about the phoenix in confinement and you felt sorry for it. At night, you snuck into the facility and run around looking for the phoenix, opening every cage and room to find it. Finally, you opened a door to see a girl, about 16, with orange, gold wings, and long brown hair, her back towards you.
"What do you want?" she asked.
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Lol. Fail story much. xD

A phoenix girl I guess. o.o I was supposed to draw something else, but it turned into this. I prefer it without wings though... Hmm.. I'll just make a color in of this and see which looks better.

Comments and criticism? I'd really appreciate some crits and advice. Especially advice on the wings. xD