[Vinyl Scratch]

i workeed really hard on thisa

[Zarago]

I'm sorry, but this is not intermediate. It is not detailed enough and it is actually classified as more of a doodle, really.

I'm not quite sure that you worked really hard on something that took one minute to do, either.

[Vinyl Scratch]

thats offensive

[Zarago]

I apologize if you took it that way, it was not mean't to be. I'm just suggesting that perhaps next time you should put your drawings in beginners or sketches and experiments. If you keep working at it, and get yourself used to Oekaki, I'm sure you'll improve.

[Wolfmoon99]

I apologize if you took it that way, it was not mean't to be. I'm just suggesting that perhaps next time you should put your drawings in beginners or sketches and experiments. If you keep working at it, and get yourself used to Oekaki, I'm sure you'll improve.

I agree, but I really do like the drawing.

[Spraypaint]

Yes, maybe instead of a stick person, you could draw him a real body, and shade him in.

[TyzerMyzer2]

Ummmmm........ this isnt intermediate this is a quick sketch of something. Its not detailed enough and by the way if you find something offensive that was just saying something on what you can improve on obviously you cant take critism which is what is expected in intermedia oekaki.

[cass.]

I agree with all that has been said, for now maybe post drawings like this in sketches and experiments, or beginners oekaki, and then it can be moved to another forum after, as suggested, you have added shading, background, colour etc.
By saying it is offensive means nothing. Have a look at the art below you. I'd rethink your interpretation of 'Intermediate.'
-Banjo2345 xx

[bugsy69]

that is AWESOME!!!!!!!!

[bugsy69]

that is AWESOME!!!!!!!!