View topic - Poor old Charlie Green O.o

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:39 am

I know this is the greatest fail on earth but it's my first go on the oekaki! Me and some of my friends are doing this random thing where people can control the elements- and Charlie Green is an awesome person who control fire. But she came out really bad on this (Dreamwalker says sorry gui!)

anyways please give me as much constructive critisiom (i can't spell by the way) and help me out ! ^^

Edit: Wow this fails.... I thought I might attempt to cure it a bit. but that failed too...

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:10 am

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:50 am

Please you critisise? ^^

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:56 am

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:18 am

bump bump bump bump bump ^^

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:40 am

My gallery · by **incompleteicarus** » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:51 am

What you should do it blend the fire together using the Blend tool and use a smaller brush for her hair. Also, your anatomy is a little off, you could put her elbows in and split the fire around her waist. With some work, this could be an awesome drawing.

ᴏeᴋaᴋi · by **Starthorn** » Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:22 pm

Wow!Thankyou so much I will do this as soon as I get the chance^^

Artist	Starthorn [gallery]
Time spent	58 minutes
Drawing sessions	3
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