Chels: One more time doesn't hurt, it's good for my low self-esteem. XD Thank you, Chels!
Three Days Grace: Thank you! Haha, you, and about five other Chicken Smoothie-ers. XD
Documentary: Thank you so much for the constructive criticism!! I truly appreciate it.
Yep, yep, I know all about the comparison and measurements stuff. My older sister took a few art classes and passed on to me what she learned.

The shoulder according to my ref is pretty much spot on (my family is notorious for narrow shoulders), but you're right, what's throwing it off is the left eye (her left, our right). It actually is in the right spot according to my ref, but the problem is that I made it too BIG, which has always been a tendency of mine. If that eye were a bit smaller, pulling it in to the left a bit (our left), it would pull the whole thing together. It would make the shoulder look larger, the head look bigger, etc. You're also right that the hand is a bit too big.

This was my first attempt at digital hair (hair has always been my nemesis), and I realize I didn't quite hit the mark. It is a bit sharp, especially on the left side (our left) of the face. I'm gonna keep practicing, and try to get that whispy-ness you mentioned.
You pretty much pointed out everything I was insecure with about this drawing, and was hoping that no one would notice, ROFL! That's good for me, though. Thanks again for the crit' and the pointers, I'll definitely keep all this in mind when I make my next drawing.

~rainheart~: Thanks again! I don't have many skills to spare, but you can have some if you like. That'll be two Uncommons, please. *holds out hand*