I'm not an expert either, but this doesn't look like a fail at all.
Maybe you should find another way of drawing the nose in the frontal view, because this line looks a bit off, but other than that, I love these sketches. Especially the second one. ^^
But would you mind helping me with something I was wondering about for a long time? Which tool do you use for the lines? I mean, how do you make them that smooth?


