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Ready, Aim, Fire! by DreamFlyer

Artist DreamFlyer [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 58 minutes
Drawing sessions 5
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Ready, Aim, Fire!

Postby DreamFlyer » Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:37 pm

Don't ya just love being able to turn you arm into a laser cannon?

My first attempt at drawing my fursona myself. Not too bad I think, but I wish I had made her bigger... and my canvas rotated back!!! Stupid thing...
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P.S. Just in case you couldn't tell, she's down on one knee...
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Re: Ready, Aim, Fire!

Postby DreamFlyer » Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:57 pm

Huh, and here I thought I did a pretty good job... apparently not as good as I thought. It might be how it's sideways that's putting people off...
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Re: Ready, Aim, Fire!

Postby Jezi » Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:59 pm

I think its pretty good ^^ a lot better than i could do, thats for sure, but you're right about it being annoying when it turns sideways XP

Edit: as for critique, I would say if there's any way you could make it more obvious she is on one knee and made it look less like you only drew the top half of her legs at first glance, it would help quite a bit i think, but otherwise it looks pretty good in my opinion ^^
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Re: Ready, Aim, Fire!

Postby DreamFlyer » Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:58 am

Thanks :D Yeah, it's just the canvas the way it is isn't so great for drawing a single person. Also, I just don't know how to make the whole down-on-one-knee thing more obvious... suggestions?


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