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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Thu Jul 05, 2018 9:30 pm

King Corvid wrote:the only criticisms I can think of would be to make the deer butt a little bit bigger since the torso looks a little disproportional in comparison, and maaybe some more detail in the water (like maybe just small drops and shines and stuff? idk)
your anatomy is really, really good, all I could recommend is continuing to work on more precise muscle grouping :>
I hope this helps ;v; (and I hope I didn't come off as rude hh)

Now that I look at it... Le booty is a tad small for the perspective hahaha
I'll have to take more time on this kind of thing the next time I draw, proportions are my nemesis *shakes fist*
Thank you, I appreciate your kindness and I think if I take what you've said into consideration, I'd probably be doing quite a lot better >w<
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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Fri Jul 06, 2018 3:56 am

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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Fri Jul 06, 2018 5:08 pm

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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Sat Jul 07, 2018 4:30 am

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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Sat Jul 07, 2018 9:37 am

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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Sat Jul 07, 2018 12:06 pm

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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby illumiรฉ » Sat Jul 07, 2018 12:17 pm

Aaa I really love this piece (it's definitely better than anything I can do) but I think your angle is a little off at some bits??

For example the ear on the right looks really off, it's too big in size and just doesn't look like it's coming out from his head... It's coming out of his arm or sth
And the shower head should really be pointing a bit towards his back instead of being straight down according to the location to the water I think? I would suggest when drawing real objects that you likely have in your house to use the real objects as a model to figure out how they would appear a certain way, it's super easy to do and can really help in being accurate!
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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Sat Jul 07, 2018 12:23 pm

Illumiรฉ wrote:Aaa I really love this piece (it's definitely better than anything I can do) but I think your angle is a little off at some bits??

For example the ear on the right looks really off, it's too big in size and just doesn't look like it's coming out from his head... It's coming out of his arm or sth
And the shower head should really be pointing a bit towards his back instead of being straight down according to the location to the water I think? I would suggest when drawing real objects that you likely have in your house to use the real objects as a model to figure out how they would appear a certain way, it's super easy to do and can really help in being accurate!

Yeah... I'm not super proud of how I did the water, been studying on it ever since so your input is very helpful <3
Hadn't looked at the ears much... I'll have to work on that haha
Thank you so much for the input, it's super helpful <3
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Re: Adjusting to the Light

Postby Steven_Universe » Sat Jul 07, 2018 10:43 pm

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