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Ichigo Kurosaki! by -Stormy-

Artist -Stormy- [gallery]
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Ichigo Kurosaki!

Postby -Stormy- » Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:49 am

Hey! This is Ichigo Kurosaki from Bleach! Just to get this strait, I do not own Bleach, or any of its characters, including Ichigo. His nickname is Strawberry, and he is in his school outfit, taking a nap with his Tensa Zangetsu zanpaktou. I think he is dreaming, and having a good dream, considering his smile. *smirks*-- pokes Ichigo
What the--
WAKE UP!!
NEVER!!!!
Oh well, he is a teenage boy. I hope you like the drawing, please comment and criticize! :D
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki!

Postby Dogs Can Bark » Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:15 am

I don't really think this is intermediate, but I could share a few things to better yourself. ^^

I think it might look better if, rather than using the same color as the lines, shade to show the wrinkles in the clothes/muscles. The neck seems a tad to thick to me, and right side of the head too flat. The cheeks and forhead would be what sticks out, rather than having a flat side. And see the top on the right where the hair connects to the forehead? It shouldn't buldge out like that. You should have the top of the head overall more circular. The mouth is a tad to far off to the side, and should be more centered, even if a smirk like that. The ear and the side of the face shouldn't be seperated by an entire line. Instead you could simply put a partial line, but keep it so it looks connected. Also, the hand, whatever it is holding onto, you should make it so it appears to be bending at the knuckles, rather than the wrists. People usually grip onto things with their fingers, rather than the wrists like that.

But other than that, I really like the way you did your shading. And just a tip, it is easier to color inside of your lines if you draw them thicker. That's what I do. It just looks alot tidier when you color inside your lines. :3 I hope that helped without seeming to rude. ^^
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki!

Postby -Stormy- » Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:51 am

Yea. I know there are a lot of flaws, and I just can't do knuckles and fingers. The rest of the problems other than the ear and the connection between the hair and forehead are meant to be that way, because I kind of wanted to make it cartoon- like. I kind of liked it though... :oops: oh well....I tried :roll:
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki!

Postby Viridika » Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:58 am

I would suggest using a reference for the face. I tried to draw him without a reference, and... *shudder*
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