Maan 20 minutes off
I Hate drawing
Oh god
Tips Needed desperately
| Artist | 707. [gallery] |
| Time spent | 1 hour, 6 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 1 |
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707. wrote:Maan 20 minutes off
I Hate drawing
Oh god
Tips Needed desperately
INeedToDoArt wrote:707. wrote:Maan 20 minutes off
I Hate drawing
Oh god
Tips Needed desperately
if you hate drawing why do you do it o-o






















Chihiro Fujisaki wrote:This is beautiful. This reminded me to check MM actually so thank you as well xD






Captain Plucky wrote:If you need some criticism, let me see if I can give you some. :3
I like their expressions a lot, and the picture itself is very cute. However, I would work on their poses. I think the girls arm (holding the phone) is a little too long, and both persons their legs don't look like they're bending properly. If it helps, you can have the girl holding a selfie stick. That might make it easier to make the arms shorter. :3 So, in your next piece, look up some references on how to draw knees. This will help you with their poses. c:
Also, it's hard to tell that the male is holding the females elbow with his hand. Try showing a little more of his left arm in the picture, that will help the onlooker see it better.
I hope this helps you! I'm not the best at giving the advice, but I hope this will give you some ideas on what to improve on. :3
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