[shybiscuit]

send help
and critique!! please i desperately need it

[rolyo]

This looks good! One thing that really stood out to me, however, was that the subject seems to lack... shoulders. If you were to stretch out your arms, that little shoulder bump doesn't really go away (either that or I'm just super skinny). The neck and left arm are both kind of too long.
One last thing, and I hope I don't come off as too critical, but it seems that the upper body and the lower body are disagreeing over the perspective? From looking at the face and chest it seems that the subject is looking directly at the camera, but the legs suggest that he's at a slant.
Faults aside this really is a lovely and adorable piece! :'D

[shybiscuit]

This looks good! One thing that really stood out to me, however, was that the subject seems to lack... shoulders. If you were to stretch out your arms, that little shoulder bump doesn't really go away (either that or I'm just super skinny). The neck and left arm are both kind of too long.
One last thing, and I hope I don't come off as too critical, but it seems that the upper body and the lower body are disagreeing over the perspective? From looking at the face and chest it seems that the subject is looking directly at the camera, but the legs suggest that he's at a slant.
Faults aside this really is a lovely and adorable piece! :'D

thank you for the critique and compliment! some of that i knew [the upper and lower body part] and others i didn't! so, thank you for giving me some pointers!