[Dio-Sama]

practicing drawing males, this is my first time. any critique? I am so new at this x.x

['osborne']

Oh my GOD! This is absolutely astounding! I love it so much Skip~ Keep up the good work~

[Dio-Sama]

Oh my GOD! This is absolutely astounding! I love it so much Skip~ Keep up the good work~

Thanks :3 anyone else like? x.x

[Dio-Sama]

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[Dio-Sama]

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[DoctorDraca]

This isn't bad. Not at all. You got proportions down and kudos on the full body! However, the abdominal muscles are a bit odd. I know what you were trying to do, but it's better to define abs through shading than through full lines. I could send some tutorials and references your way if you want to? Or even a redline if you'd prefer that? I'm horrible at written critiques, but I can also attempt that if you prefer text over visuals.

[Dio-Sama]

This isn't bad. Not at all. You got proportions down and kudos on the full body! However, the abdominal muscles are a bit odd. I know what you were trying to do, but it's better to define abs through shading than through full lines. I could send some tutorials and references your way if you want to? Or even a redline if you'd prefer that? I'm horrible at written critiques, but I can also attempt that if you prefer text over visuals.

yes I was thinking of making the lines a lighter colour, because black lines seem to bold. yes the muscle are odd xD hopefully if I try again and make the lines less bolder it should look more okay. doing the hair is another challenge all together xD hopefully when I get this right I can do the hair right also haha. well I added you to do redline if ya want. :3

edit** also hands are gonna be a pain too

[Aqacia]

Thats great but i can't help but think that the neck is a little too wide and gets too narrow i don't know just looks a little strange for me and the muscles are odd but hey way better then i draw males XD

[Dio-Sama]

Thats great but i can't help but think that the neck is a little too wide and gets too narrow i don't know just looks a little strange for me and the muscles are odd but hey way better then i draw males XD

yeah muscles are odd like what Draca said do shading than full lines (or in my opinion make them lighter, like a light brown) and Im sure shading will make it look much better and re-doing the muscles a slight bit too

psh! I always draw my men with thick necks xD it's smexy. to me anyway hehe

[DoctorDraca]

Here you go:

viewtopic.php?f=33&t=2229036

Sorry about the lateness. I didn't have a tablet available up until now.