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Amber Life Prologue: Part I by Wolfin

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Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:23 am

A dark-felled Brute stepped out into the shallow moonlight. He felt the warm, damp moss under his paws and looked up to the starry sky. As he took a step forward, the sound of the waterfall sharply churned in his ears. He flinched slightly, curling up his long tail. The two black spikes on either side were tinged with red, the same colour as his eyes.
The Brute had claw marks down his flank, they left red scars that were even more vivid in the small light.
A tan-coloured Vixen growled behind him. He turned around and uncurled his tail. The Brute saw she had unsheathed claws and bared fangs. He lashed his tail and she sheathed her claws.
"Basking Falls has not failed in disturbing prey, Redshadow" the Vixen growled.
Redshadow smiled. His tail curled again. He spotted the Vixens white spikes, they were tinged with a hazel colour. The Vixen curled her tail then turned her head to the side, showing hazel-coloured scars on her muzzle. Redshadow showed his vivid red scars. They had both passed.
"What are you now to be refered as?" Redshadow asked.
"Hazelsand," she answered.
Redshadow nodded and smiled. He was happy she had made it, she was always a good kit. They trained together with their scholar for an eclipse. Redshadow sat down and looked up at the sky. Two more moonrises and the amber life would open, raining upon them and rising the river. Black Death had passed and left them with a drout further up stream. The water would be flooding in right now, Redshadow thought.
He nodded kindly to Hazelsand.
"Well, Hazelsand, do you want me to walk home with you?" Redshadow offered then added quickly. "Just for company."
The black Brute knew only too well that Hazelsand could handle anything fine on her own and that she didn't like to hear otherwise. Hazelsand shook her head. She turned and raced to the back of the waterfall and begun climbing up it. Redshadow tilted his head. No doubt she wanted him to follow. No. He would remain strong.
Strangly and subconciously he began climbing after her. Hazelsand looked over her shoulder at him. Redshadow glared back. He wasn't supposed to follow. He was supposed to lead.
Redshadow sighed before realising that Hazelsand was glaring back at him. He smiled weakly before she smiled back.
Before he knew it they were both standing at the top of Basking Falls, the wind blowing through their fells and watery spray blowing in their faces.
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:25 am

Please read!
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:06 am

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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby MistCreek » Sun Jul 11, 2010 4:11 pm

cool! :D
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so.... hmmm.....wat do i put here again?

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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Garucca » Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:21 pm

OMG where can i find more i loved this, i write wolf stories
have you got the rest of the story some where ?????? oh and good picture
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:54 pm

Mist Creek: Thanx! And I'm still waiting for more of Decendent!
petlover99: Thanks! I'd love to read some of yours! I have the rest of the prologue on another site and I'll be posting it in another picture. I haven't started Chapter 1 yet but I'll probably draw the picture then put the story with it today, write the first chapter tonight then post it tomorrow.
I don't really try on the picture it's just so I get peoples attention, I've written LOADS of other stories but no one ever reads them.
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby 7feriwolf7 » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:08 pm

*raises and waves hand around wildly* I Will read every story you have! I also want to read the rest of this... Luffles!!! *excited*
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:54 pm

Thanx! You'll be here a while I have a few I may link some when I go on my computer, I'm on my iPod
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby Wolfin » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:58 pm

For those who like this story, bad news. For all who don't, good news.
The oekaki isn't working for me, I won't be able to post the next bit. I could post the whole prologue on the Share Your Creations board but no one ever reads them. I have about 10 stories that got about 30 views but no replies.
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Re: Amber Life Prologue: Part I

Postby 7feriwolf7 » Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:19 pm

I'll read them! I'll go there right now! :'DDD
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