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by BlueCynder » Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:18 am

Another result of boredom, I quite like this one though. Comments please

Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.

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Re: ???

by 88310 » Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:55 am

I like this. Its cool... awesome background, only its kind of distracting.

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Re: ???

by BlueCynder » Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:05 am

ooh someone commented, thanks! hummmmmm, i'll change it then.

Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.

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Joined: Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:23 am

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Re: ???

by BlueCynder » Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:10 am

is this any better?

Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.

BlueCynder

Posts: 1049

Joined: Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:23 am