[may1167]

Second intermediate posting! Long story short I've been having issues with feelings....I feel like I'm being ignored and sometimes hated....I just hope someone comes bye and gives me a helping hand. Other than that I hope you enjoy this and blah blah blah sorry for rambling The timer does not know what it is saying I sort of left this open while drawing other pictures on paper....so yah comments and criticisms welcomed just please don't be to harsh I don't think I can handle it right now

Words color the world around us it can either be nice or not so all so choose wisely!

[Squid-a-roni]

This is not me being harsh, but i honestly do not think this is intermediate.It looks semi rushed and sort of beginner.Sorry if you find my comment harsh but i was jsut giving advice.The colours sort of offset especially with the fire and the words.You can barely see the word Love and hate looks like it should be in the one above it.

[angel23456]

This is not me being harsh, but i honestly do not think this is intermediate.It looks semi rushed and sort of beginner.Sorry if you find my comment harsh but i was jsut giving advice.The colours sort of offset especially with the fire and the words.You can barely see the word Love and hate looks like it should be in the one above it.

Maybe it doesn't belong in Intermediate, but yeah, that did sound harsh and you didn't give any advice on how to fix it.

[Squid-a-roni]

This is not me being harsh, but i honestly do not think this is intermediate.It looks semi rushed and sort of beginner.Sorry if you find my comment harsh but i was jsut giving advice.The colours sort of offset especially with the fire and the words.You can barely see the word Love and hate looks like it should be in the one above it.

Maybe it doesn't belong in Intermediate, but yeah, that did sound harsh and you didn't give any advice on how to fix it.

Becaus ei honestly do not know how to have her fix it in any way.I was not being harsh.

[P0CKETKNIFE]

I don't think it's intermediate worthy either but I do have some tips. I don't know much about the type of art you do so please bare with me! First off try not to overuse the blend tool. Sometimes it can make it look beginner if you blend a lot of colors. Also the human shadows are a bit shaky so you could work on smoothing out your lines a bit. The grass could be a little more realistic too. Overall it's not a bad drawing though! With a bit of work it could be amazing. c: