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I Went To A Party, Mom by Agent Blackhawk

Artist Agent Blackhawk [gallery]
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I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby Agent Blackhawk » Wed Apr 17, 2013 5:15 am

I went to a party, And remembered what you said. You told me not to drink, so I had a sprite instead.
I felt proud of myself, The way you said I would, that I didn't drink and drive, though some friends said I should.
I made a healthy choice, And your advice to me was right. The party finally ended, and the kids drove out of sight.
I got into my car, Sure to get home in one piece. I never knew what was coming, Mom, something I expected least.
Now I'm lying on the pavement, And I hear the policeman say, the kid that caused this wreck was drunk, Mom, his voice seems far away.
My own blood's all around me, As I try hard not to cry. I can hear the paramedic say, this girl is going to die.
I'm sure the guy had no idea, While he was flying high. Because he chose to drink and drive, now I would have to die.
So why do people do it, Knowing that it ruins lives? And now the pain is cutting me, like a hundred stabbing knives.
Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom, Tell daddy to be brave. And when I go to heaven, put 'Daddy's Girl' on my grave.
Someone should have taught him, That it's wrong to drink and drive. Maybe if his parents had, I'd still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter, Mom I'm getting really scared. These are my final moments, and I'm so unprepared.
I wish that you could hold me Mom, As I lie here and die. I wish that I could say, I love you and goodbye.


Please don't drink and drive

I did not write the poem, I found it on fanfiction.net. The timer is correct, as useual. Please like and comment.

Edit: 18 likes :o Wow! Thank you! :D
Last edited by Agent Blackhawk on Tue Aug 20, 2013 4:54 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby Agent Blackhawk » Fri May 10, 2013 7:22 am

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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby Ariana. » Fri May 10, 2013 8:02 am

That poem made me sad :c
This has a strong message that more people need to understand and listen to. I've never lost somebody to drunk driving, but whenever I watch the news I hear about how some drunk teenagers died in a freeway accident, or a how a man with three kids and a wife died when he was hit by a drunk driver.. It's just tragic and it's not worth it.. Always better to be safe then sorry, so I agree with you, never drink and drive.
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby gumy » Fri May 10, 2013 8:21 am

Oh my god im crying TT-TT
I read this in health class, i yelled at my teacher for making me cry.
I agree with this. Last June there was a girl who was driving home from her job. She was an honor student, just graduated and was going to go to Harvard in the fall {an amazing college}. Of course, an intoxicated man smashed his car, and killed her. It was the saddest thing ever :(
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby ~Tornado~ » Fri May 10, 2013 9:08 am

This is so sad....
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby A*Viola*Named*Steve » Fri May 10, 2013 9:24 am

I cried when i read this. It's terrible how people drink and drive, then get into a car crash, not thinking about how it'll affect the others and their families.
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby howl. » Fri May 10, 2013 10:05 am

Lovely drawing, beautiful poem. And a good message.
I would cry, but I don't cry a lot xD
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby BlazeMeow » Fri May 10, 2013 10:07 am

O.O

*Sits in corner and rocks back and forth while hugging knees.*
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby Frosttheleopard » Fri May 10, 2013 10:12 am

Wow... this is so sad. But it's the real world, and what really happens in life. I have one thing to say to EVERYONE.
NEVER drink and drive!
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Re: I Went To A Party, Mom

Postby Agent Blackhawk » Fri May 10, 2013 2:07 pm

I'm glad you guys like the art. I almost cried when I read it the first time also, it's now on my fanfiction profile. I just had the urge to do it with art.
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