[boat]

Random human practice :3

[june-♓]

oh man i hope this doesnt sound stup!d or rude but i see like a LOT of potential here and i was wondering if you wanted any crit? because ahhhh i would honestly love to see mre from you and this looks so good i just wanna help you a bit im sorry but if you dont want me to kick me away its all good

[boat]

Thank you, and I would really love some crit ^^

[june-♓]

oh okay fantastic! well okay i see like three major things and that would be first to try to make the arms longer, which are supposed to go (fingertips) to about mid-thigh. then i would also suggest making the hips a bit larger and going off of that, since these look like baggy pants, just keep in mind that thighs are almost always thicker than the lower part of the legs and that should show if you were drawing plain legs or tight pants. the third thing is that the neck is a bit too big. since this is an anime-looking style, youll want to make the neck match the body as opposed to the head. the neck would probably look suitable if you were having much more realistic proportions, but since the head is meant to be a bit larger, the neck should be skinnier and shorter.

the shading looks INCREDIBLY good though and i VERY much love how you do your lines. the only thing i could suggest there is that if you havent yet maybe start using smoothing? if you use a tablet i would suggest 40-50% but on a mouse i think what the common percentage is would be 80%? im not sure if you use it yet but trust me it makes a world of difference if youre not.

im sorry this was just much too much fun because theres really not that much wrong and if you can fix a couple of things you would be so amazing and i couldnt help it ahhh... (also im sorry i had the "!" in stupid up there, on another site i have to censor things like that and it carried over ahah)

[boat]

Ah okay, thanks for the tips :3
I'll try applying them on my next drawing. I normally use 70% smoothing on my laptop touch pad ^^

[june-♓]

ahhhh haha see i figured you already used smoothing. its just really hard on a touchpad, right? but is the touchpad the reason your shading looks a little ripply? because i love it like a lot.
im sorry im so chatty i really cant help it ill stop now

[lucy&oreo1234]

cool drawing! that reminds me of my friend, she has a panda hat and i nicknamed her panda!