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just felt like drawing someone dancing, so yeah
critism appreciated!!! :3

[Miyazaki]

This is really cool!

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thank you!! :33 <33

[serendipitydaring]

no critism- only praise

i looks good

[SSQM]

This is really cute! I like the sketchiness of it, and is great for simplistic drawings, but if you wanted to take this to the next level, you could color it how you normally would, and it might not seem as sloppy.

Or even, use the color to indicate the darker parts, as in, fill in more where there's shadow but leave where light would be hitting them with less color.

Just some suggestions. :3

[welcome to carnival.]

thank you so much!! :33 <33
this is quite old ^^ i intended to make it sketchy, but now that you say; maybe i'll make a seperate clean version of it ^^
but thank you so much for always criticising, since nobody does that so i'm glad you do!! thank you <333

[SSQM]

I can understand the intent, but to improve on the sketchy coloring and to make it even more three-dimensional, you could do what I said. :3

Of course. ^^ <3