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Girls Face - WIP! by CaptiveLegacy

Artist CaptiveLegacy [gallery]
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Girls Face - WIP!

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:38 am

Currently a wip, I normally dont draw humans so hopefully this doesnt look to bad so far c:

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Re: Girls Face - WIP!

Postby Cloverkitty » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:28 pm

Looking good so far!
A minor critique, though; Her face looks too long. Maybe you could try lifting the nose and mouth up a little closer to the eyes or enlarging the eyes so they match the nose.
For you to not draw humans on a regular basis, this looks excellent. I can't wait to see the finished result! :thumbup:
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Re: Girls Face - WIP!

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:31 pm

Thanks for the critique!! I'll probably do something about the eyes, after taking another look they seem too small for the face xD .
Thanks again! c:
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Re: Girls Face - WIP!

Postby angel23456 » Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:05 am

The nose should be smaller and less long.
The eyes need to be bigger and more in the middle of the face. (The forehead of a human tends to take up half the head.)
Maybe the mouth a bit bigger as well. :)

No offence, but it kinda looks like a guy right now, probably from the movie "Brother Bear" ;)
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Re: Girls Face - WIP!

Postby FREDDYFROGGY » Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:07 am

I think this is truelly beautiful!
the only thing as others said was the lenth of the nose, but besides that it GORGEOUS!<33

your a natural at shading by the way! :3
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Re: Girls Face - WIP!

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:57 am

Alright, thanks alot for the critique! I might just redo most of the upper half of the face, it seems to small for the size of the nose. I know the mouth needs to be abit larger, but I just put one there just to get an idea of what it may look like c:

I know right? xD . I really dont know which gender im going for right now, I guess i'll know when its finished P:
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