[King of Crows]

The moon rises high tonight,
It's belly round and full.
And she sings her night time song,
She sighs the tides a lull.
Her quiet whispers,
at the waves they pull.
And her bitter sweet harmonies,
drag me from my slumber,
I rise above the chattering waves,
blink open sleepy eyes,
and smile at the thought,
that she makes all of us rise.

This is Cobalt...he took 1 hour and 10 minutes to complete. I really, really hope you guys think that this belongs here. Mods, if this isn't quite intermediate, could you please send it over to beginners...however, leave it here if it is good enough, please.

All (c) me

[King of Crows]

Just bumping this up a bit...this is probably one of my best done Oekaki pieces so far...it would mean a lot to me if I could a bit of feed back, some critiques, and advice you may have to offer...all appreciated


Thanks,
Mercury

[Twisted Illusions]

I haven't got much crit, except for maybe make the sea waves seem more realistic? But I still love it to bits! *Like*

[dddddonuts]

This is beautiful and truly stunning; I love how the eyes really contrast c:

[King of Crows]

I haven't got much crit, except for maybe make the sea waves seem more realistic? But I still love it to bits! *Like*

Thanks a ton! Yeah...water is most deffinintly not my strong point...I need a lot of practice...but eventually I hope to be able to do more realistic landscapes

This is beautiful and truly stunning; I love how the eyes really contrast c:

Thank you so much! At first I was a little uncertain about the eye color...but I like how the orange pops out

[sergeant serket]

finally, a piece of art that { at least what i think } shows mermaids don't wear seashell bras and have long flowing hair, have perfect faces with normal human skin and ears, and don't all... um... no more rants about the little mermaid.


but great job <3 maybe i'll make a mermaid now.... hehehe

[sergeant serket]

so sorry for the second post!

[King of Crows]

Lol, Cobalt isn't a merman He's a close relative...he actually has legs, Mers have many more fins, and lack lips (making up for it in sharp teeth!) Haha, yeah, what I think mers look like is SO different from the Little Mermaid...