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~Dreams of Paradise~ by *SN RADIOACTIVITY*

Artist *SN RADIOACTIVITY* [gallery]
Time spent 7 hours, 5 minutes
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~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby *SN RADIOACTIVITY* » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:36 am

When she was just a girl
She expected the world
But it flew away from her reach
and the bullets catch in her teeth
Life goes on, it gets so heavy
The wheel breaks the butterfly
Every tear a waterfall
In the night the stormy night she'll close her eyes
In the night the stormy night away she'd fly

and dreams of
Para-para-paradise
Para-para-paradise
Para-para-paradise


I was listening to some music, and had the art program up, and this kinda came while listening to the music~ xD
I think the timer may be off by an hour or so, as I was doing other things as well~ :3

Lyrics (c) Coldplay

*EDIT~ Began touching up, though haven't finished, will finish it later! Finished the touch-ups!

~SN.
Last edited by *SN RADIOACTIVITY* on Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby Desayah » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:58 am

omg i love this picutre and i adore that song too. your horses are realistic
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby *SN RADIOACTIVITY* » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:01 am

Thank you! 8D
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby Actually.A.Herondale » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:13 pm

it looks like Topthorn and Joey from War Horse....

nice picture! :thumbup:
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby *SN RADIOACTIVITY* » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:16 pm

Does it? I have never seen the film~
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby king_bear » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:15 pm

HunterOfArtemis is right :) I read the book, and if I see this picture, it indeed reminds me of strong, brave Topthorn and our good friend Joey... Great work, SN :)
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby *SN RADIOACTIVITY* » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:24 pm

Thanks! (:
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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby king_bear » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:39 pm

Welcome C:
Though, may I write a critique?
(Don't read this if you don't want no critique... Or something)
The nostril of the brown horse is placed too much forward, it could be a bit closer to the mouth, and the nose could be a bit less pointy. Also, the ears of the black horse seem to be... Well, the back-one seems to be placed a bit different than the other. I don't know if it should be a laid-back ear, or depth, but it looks a bit weird. Though, the shading is awesome and I love their eyes <3
One last point, I will really stop after this: the brown horse misses an ear xD

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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby *SN RADIOACTIVITY* » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:47 pm

Thanks for the critique~ I didn't use any reference whatsoever, so I guess was a bit sloppy on the anatomy~ xD
I'm on my phone right now so I can't change anything, but when I get on my laptop I will~ C:

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Re: ~Dreams of Paradise~

Postby king_bear » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:00 pm

I am not saying you should edit something... I just give you some critique for the next time ;)
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