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Cat redlines by Novie Kenari

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Cat redlines

Postby Novie Kenari » Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:31 pm

^^ you really are good with your leg anatomy :] you just needed to shorten them a little.

1. cats normally have short necks, that curve nicely to their back. also dont be afraid to use the anatomy sketch to help you sketch. cats are usually bones if you think about it :B not to much meat on them..
2. try to make the rib cage slightly lower, and use that to shape your stomach (you did a nice job on it but it could use a little improvement.) and their chests also have a pont like end to it.
3. use a line to help you with your tail, and dont forget to keep the same shape all the way around ^^
also the back legs just needed to be slightly shorter, but nie antamomy on them :] also were there knee is, it doesnt have any muscle there so try to keep it as close to the bone. if it doesent look right then your leg needs some work.
4. basicly what was said in number three.

Just a bonus forgot to mark this one:
your shoulder is quite nice, but could be slightly smaller. also, try to get the shape of the animals skull and that will help you get their head shape spot on ^^ (in my gallary i did somthing like that with a wolf, i also drew a cat skull but didnt do anything else to it.)

anyway, hope this helps!
(i also saw you lined up your legs ^^ they look alot better as far as being even :])
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Re: Cat redlines

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Dec 07, 2011 10:38 pm

thanks :) this will help out a lot ill practice in school a bit xD
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