[gabsc]

So this is my second oekaki and I think it turned out well. Comments and constructive critisicsm are appreciated!
It was done with a mouse if anyone wants to know.

[voidsounds]

That's an amazing picture! I could never do that! Intermediate!

[Zarago]

A very good job, especially with a mouse? If you're looking for critique, I'd say that the body was a tad too long. The muzzle could also do with blending into the face. But it really is a very good piece, keep it up!

[Xelinator]

Excellent! Can I give things to improve? They're better said than done, but -
Realistic the eyes and lighten the lines so they look more realistic. Same with muzzle. If you smudged them a little and lighten the lines - perfect!

[Pelzball]

wow this is so sweet <3

[growl.lingo]

wow this is wonderful...so your secound okie you say even better ^^

[JamBlack]

Awww its so cute And fluffy *huggles*

[suestar]

OMJESUS Its soooooo cute/adorable. Great good

[gabsc]

thanks for all the pointers! I'm actually not entirely done it yet so I'll see if I can fix a few things while I finish it.

[♥ The Pound ♥]

thats amazing espesially with a mouse I draw with a mouse and I should realy be quite good at drawing cats being as I have 4 2 females 2 males the males are Jack and Tigger i normaly call tigger tigzypies and the 2 females are Whiskey and Marleyi normaly call Marley moo as in cow moo