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"redline" for Scamps by Onyxeva

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"redline" for Scamps

Postby Onyxeva » Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:44 am

Redline for Scamps, I was supposed to do this a while ago, but kept forgetting. OTL

Summary:
-You did pretty good with the placement of the limbs and body length, usually I see dragons or creatures with really short torsos. Excellent job. :3

-The neck was a little wide at the top. My rule of thumb is to make sure the neck is of a uniform width and then go back in and edit depending on the creature. If the head seems like it'd be really heavy, then the neck will have to be wider to compensate.

-Forearms were ok, just gotta remember the structure of them, the shoulder will be up higher.

-The back leg had some trouble with structure, so I also doodled leg anatomy in the corner.

-Oh and I went over wing anatomy a little bit on a different layer, you can sorta see it now. Basically I was just showing you basic wing structure and what feathers look like. o uo-b


Overall nice job and I look forward to seeing more of your work. <3
Last edited by Onyxeva on Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: "redline" for Tennis.

Postby TheScamperPony » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:27 am

Yaya!! THank you! 8DDD <33333 I love it! It helps so much! :)[b]

Hahaha but, Onyx, I'm sorry to say that I am not Tennis. x3

EDIT: WAITTTTY!!!! I need access to it. x3
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Re: "redline" for Tennis.

Postby Onyxeva » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:41 am

WOOPS.

edit: well that was sorta embarrassing. 8D All fixed now, so you should be able to edit it. e ue;
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Re: "redline" for Scamps

Postby TheScamperPony » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:52 am

Haha! It's okay, and thanks! <3
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