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Dance to Your Own Rhythm by Arouria

Artist Arouria [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 3 minutes
Drawing sessions 3
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Dance to Your Own Rhythm

Postby Arouria » Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:56 am

Title, uh..Don't ask.

This just kind of popped into my head, I somewhat used this reference.

Timer's off by, 45 mins to an hour? Something like that.

Not my favorite picture, but I put over an hour's worth into it so I won't rant to hard.

Comments/crit please?

EDIT: Okay I'll admit when I was drawing this I was half thinking about my Fantroll in God Tier and Half thinking about how fun it would be to be this person eue
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Re: Dream for Yesterday

Postby Destonation » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:02 am

Wow. It's amazing!

Great work my friend! You really are a great digital artist!

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Re: Dream for Yesterday

Postby h a z e l » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:05 am

I love this. It is diffrent. Awesome.
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Re: Dream for Yesterday

Postby GREML0RD » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:09 am

very cool love it <3
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Re: Dream for Yesterday

Postby Arouria » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:11 am

Thanks c:
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Re: Dream for Yesterday

Postby Arouria » Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:57 am

I tried adding a hand to it, ugg.

Anyone have crit? owo
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Re: Dance to Your Own Rhythm

Postby Destonation » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:31 am

It really looks great!

But maybe you could try and shade/add highlights. ouo b
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Re: Dance to Your Own Rhythm

Postby Arouria » Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:53 am

Thanks

And, maybe ouo
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Re: Dance to Your Own Rhythm

Postby Arouria » Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:57 am

Crit bump ouo
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Re: Dance to Your Own Rhythm

Postby C-ren » Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:24 pm

Behh your so amazing at Oekaki! ;0;

Anyway I will critique as you have asked *despite me loving it so much*
The hair is a little to linear at the bottom, give it more feeling, more flowyness, to describe feeling, other than that its amazing.
Try blurring the wings a little and giving them definate shape , so it looks delicate and serene.

Thats all I have to recommend , loving itt <3
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