[Starthorn]

low and behold... official fail No. 3!
I'm really not happy about the way that this turned out
I was attempting to draw something out of a dream I had, so was never really aiming for complete reality, but all the same, the figure is badly out of proportion, and the wings... well
Anyway, if anyone can give me some constructive criticism, or just leave a comment, it would be very much appreciated ^^

[Starthorn]

bump... anyone???^^

[diatomdude]

Very nice The person is amazing! Great shading and anatomy. The only suggestion i have is maybe give the wing a bit more definition.

[Beautifuldayz]

maybe also where you blended on the wings where the white is, to follow trough with the feathers instead of having the straight cuz then it will look like wind is going through the feathers and pushing them in the swirlish kida direction. jus a suggestion tho lol

[Starthorn]

Yeh... thanks guys! I was a bit annoyed about the wings too. I tried to do them in more detail, but it just looked silly. Over done if you like. Any suggestions?

[diatomdude]

Yeh... thanks guys! I was a bit annoyed about the wings too. I tried to do them in more detail, but it just looked silly. Over done if you like. Any suggestions?

No not really your shading/colour use is fantastic, and your background is awesome. Wing are really the only thing.

[Starthorn]

Thankies^^ I will edit the wings later

[Starthorn]

bump

[K4typ]

V GOOD BACKGROUND TWIN NOT EPIC FAIL NO.3 IS SLIGHTLY WACKY THOUGH

[gemini22]

if u take the 3 feathers off the bottom it will give the wings a sort of tribal look:)