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I need a redline

by Alaska. » Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:25 pm

Please could you redline for me? I really need one and am looking to get better, so please I am looking for people who are better than me, sorry.

Livestream-off!

I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: I need a redline

by laces » Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:51 pm

I can redline for you tomorrow, Lotus. ^^

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Re: I need a redline

by Alaska. » Tue Nov 15, 2011 8:43 am

Thanks, you're added

Livestream-off!

I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

Links:
•Art Shop (Closed/inactive)
•My characters
•WOI FANCLUB!
•My Deviantart page

Alaska.

Posts: 5053

Joined: Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:54 am