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Saber Redline for Blazer-Peppermint by Ovacalix

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Artist Ovacalix [gallery]
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Saber Redline for Blazer-Peppermint

Postby Ovacalix » Mon Nov 14, 2011 10:05 am

Here are some tips!

Face
The Snouts are almost box-like, with the chin poking out some,and it would have fur on the bottom(sorta like a lion :))
The teeth are farther back, they wouldnt be directly after the lip.
Its always nice to show a little muscle. (i used small red lines to define them :))
You had the Saber's eye shut, so i made it open for you so you would know what it would look like.
Also, the hears dont start at the stop of the head, it would be more further down.
Theres also some fur on the bottom of the cheekbone :)

Neck/Chest
Remember the shoulders and forearm.
Felines done really have collar-bones so they have little chest(you did good on this)
behind the head, the neck wouldnt immediatly slope own, it would curve more :)

I hope it helped! I personally am not to good with sabers, sorry :)
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Re: Saber Redline for Blazer-Peppermint

Postby GREML0RD » Mon Nov 14, 2011 10:37 am

i think you did fine so dont say your not good thats really good
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Re: Saber Redline for Blazer-Peppermint

Postby Ovacalix » Mon Nov 14, 2011 12:41 pm

Thanks dovestar c:
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Re: Saber Redline for Blazer-Peppermint

Postby Ovacalix » Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:38 pm

Hmm, now I wanna draw sabers c:
Any tips for myself? And blazer?
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