[CelticWolfSong]

Kianna, my power is to be yours. But, with power, comes responsibility. Use your power wisely.
If you do not, your fate will be the same as mine.

The wolf in the image is Larch the Great King. His story is told in the mist surrounding him. His Alphas were killed in a battle, and only he was brave enough to take position as the new Alpha. After winning the next battle, the other packs began to respect him, and eventually made him King. However, after only a few years as the King, the defeated pack's leader, Claw, came and murdered him in his sleep. His mate, Sierra, awoke the next morning to find him dead. She was later granted immortality to serve her pack as a medicine wolf. Years and years later, after his kingdom had broken apart into turmoil once again, he sent a prophecy to Sierra:

"When no power comes to the spirit, for two generations worth, my power will go to the first, one of average birth."

Kianna was the first wolf born with a spirit power, after two generations with none, and even though her mother was the Beta, her father was an Omega. Her ability was to fly, representing her free and independent spirit. Larch chose her, and gave her his power. A little over a week later, he made her the Queen of the packs.

[AtomicMilkshake]

Sorry dear, but this doesn't reach intermediate standards yet. I do think the little wolves are very well worth it, but the spirit wolf nead to be worked of a little ^^

[Aracenae]

This is lovely, but it needs some work. I suggest you smooth out the grey lines (hair?) and add a little more glow to the spirit wolf's head. You really have a lot of potential, you just need a tiny bit of practice.

[CelticWolfSong]

Sorry dear, but this doesn't reach intermediate standards yet. I do think the little wolves are very well worth it, but the spirit wolf nead to be worked of a little ^^

Thanks for the advice. I was thinking that myself. I'll do my best to fix it.

[CelticWolfSong]

This is lovely, but it needs some work. I suggest you smooth out the grey lines (hair?) and add a little more glow to the spirit wolf's head. You really have a lot of potential, you just need a tiny bit of practice.

Thanks! I fixed it up a little. What do you think?