[HWL]

I did another red-line :D this one was pretty fun(: Sorry, some of its messy D:

A FEW THINGS
-The head needs to...ah...bubble out a bit. Like the forehead needs to be a little higher. (hope that makes sense -.-)
-Tuck the chest a little
-The leg is much higher up, especially the shoulder muscle...thing lol n.n
-the back shuld dip in a bit
-The stomach should tuck in a little
-Near leg is good, just a bit fatter at the bottom.
-Far leg should be a little bigger, and more bent.
-DETAILS, my dear. You are missing in details): Add little tufts of fur on legs, stomach, neck, tail, shoulder, ets. Add some cheek fur on the face. Put thick fur on the neck and tail, not as much on the legs. A little fur on the face.
-Make the ears a tad bigger

Hope I helped ^3^ Sorry if I sounded harsh at all, im new at this >.<


HWL