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Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy by Susiron

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Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Susiron » Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:13 pm

This is a redline for Fluttershy.

The main thing I see is that the eye farther away needs to be closer to the nose, and the snout itself made longer, and more squared.
The brow line belongs over the eyes, not directly next to the eye.
The nose is strangely shaped-- here's a VERY nice ref-- http://kaylink.deviantart.com/#/d2u5vkp

The canines usually pop out around the tongue, and the top canines might show a little, too.

The ears could be a little smaller, and your wolf overall need FLOOF. Wolves are very floofy! C:

Here's a quick tips thing for wolf heads, with other references in the description: viewtopic.php?f=30&t=858451


Use plenty of references and practice all of the time. You'll improve in no time!
Hope this helps! C:
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Re: Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Ailani » Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:18 pm

This helped so much :D I am trying to get a more realasitic approach to my art. Ive been feeling like ive been stuck for a while and been really frustrated! This helps a lot! Thank you :D. I will use more references and use the refs and tips you've given me :] Thank you again! :D
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Re: Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Domo<3 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 10:27 pm

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Re: Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Kite » Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:08 pm

this is gorgeous xD i dont have any critique or anything for it! durn! your artwork continues to amaze me... and what are you talking about!?!?!? there's not too much chin on here, my friend! ish perfect! :lol:
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Re: Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Susiron » Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:14 pm

neonkiwi wrote:this is gorgeous xD i dont have any critique or anything for it! durn! your artwork continues to amaze me... and what are you talking about!?!?!? there's not too much chin on here, my friend! ish perfect! :lol:


Haha, thank you! xD
If anything, I think the eyes are a little too close together, though.

Well, it's hard to see it here, but when I draw profiles, I draw wolves with very squared snouts. xD
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Re: Wolf Face Redline for Fluttershy

Postby Kite » Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:22 pm

Susiron wrote:
neonkiwi wrote:this is gorgeous xD i dont have any critique or anything for it! durn! your artwork continues to amaze me... and what are you talking about!?!?!? there's not too much chin on here, my friend! ish perfect! :lol:


Haha, thank you! xD
If anything, I think the eyes are a little too close together, though.

Well, it's hard to see it here, but when I draw profiles, I draw wolves with very squared snouts. xD

no, no, its a great style to have! it looks very... asian..... or something....
anyways, the eyes are a good distance apart, it looks like a large mutt or a lab mix or something cute like that xD its great, dont change a thing!
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