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Wolf Face Redline by Susiron

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Wolf Face Redline

Postby Susiron » Thu Nov 03, 2011 4:37 pm

This is a redline for ϰ-βяσωиιɛ<3.

Alright, to be perfectly honest, I had to read the comments on your drawing to tell that it was a wolf. The anatomy of your drawing is much more catlike in many ways. : U

For one, there should be a snout. A nice, long, slightly squared snout.The chin should also run to meet the rest of the mouth, rather than giving up halfway.
And wolves do have whiskers, but not like the ones you have on yours. That was one of the things that led me to believe that it was a cat.

The eyes should be a little closer together,smaller, and more wolf-like.
There also tends to be lines around the wolf's eyes, making "brows."

Here is a BEAUTIFUL wolf face photograph: http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=wolf&or ... 6#/d2and70
Here you can see the eyes and brows very clearly.

Wolves have a LOT of fluff on their neck, so it should be much larger.
Just look at this guy's mane-- http://lupinicious.deviantart.com/art/E ... ious&qo=94

Wolves don't have stubby little limbs like the one in your drawing, and they should not be able to bend or lift like that at all. Especially considering the length of a wolf's neck, you should only be able to see the ridge of the shoulders here.

For the ears, I turned them backwards since, with the position you had the one in, it would make more sense for them to be turned back.
You can also see a nice defining line of fur that slightly separates the ears from the jaw. -- http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=wolf&or ... 44#/dq87ll


Reference as much as possible, and keep practicing, and you'll improve in no time! : 3

I must say I commend you for using a mouse for this. x3
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Re: Wolf Face Redline

Postby ϰ-βяσωиιɛ<3 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:23 am

thank you soooo much :{D
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