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Head - Trying Realism by Transmute

Artist Transmute [gallery]
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Head - Trying Realism

Postby Transmute » Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:38 pm

Need critique. Until I can get critque, and correct the problems. this will stay a WIP. Tis' a wolf.
Last edited by Transmute on Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Head - Trying Realism

Postby apricity » Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:44 pm

If you want porportion critique you may want to state what animal this drawing above is of. ^^; I really like the sketchy lines though against the black, it looks pretty. (:
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Re: Head - Trying Realism

Postby Bellamy » Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:52 pm

well, if you'd like my critique, the muzzle is a bit big for the rest of the face, and the eyes should be a little bit smaller ^^

However, that's just tips for realism ^^ personaly runaway, I LOVE your style!!

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Re: Head - Trying Realism

Postby ty_tay » Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:00 am

Try bringing the forehead up a bit and pulling the up with a slight angle


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