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My gallery · by **Mrs.Denmark** » Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:45 am

This is a Brown wolf caught in a fire

My gallery · by **BayloneRose** » Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:34 am

sorry but this dosnt belong in intermediate

My gallery · by **Meu** » Mon Oct 31, 2011 12:11 pm

BayloneRose wrote:sorry but this dosnt belong in intermediate

It would be nice if you gave some constructive crit.

Anyways, you did a wonderful job, but you need to define the fire and cave alot more, because I almost couldn't tell what it was until I saw the description, and your picture should be able to speak for itself. Along with that, the wolf is really squished up, and almost completely missing it's torso- it's neck is literally touching it'd tail. I really think that this could be intermediate, but you have a ways to go, practicing on your wolf anatomy. Anatomy is probably the biggest problem with a lot of people.

My gallery · by **KatieCT** » Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:13 pm

Maybe study up on the wolf's anatomy, try to get the feel of drawing it by practicing!

oh and I agree with Jadesong, try to define the fire, make it a bit more er..firey? lol good job otherwise!

My gallery · by **Mrs.Denmark** » Mon Oct 31, 2011 2:49 pm

Sorry i started to do Oekaki a week ago :oops:

Artist	Mrs.Denmark [gallery]
Time spent	32 minutes
Drawing sessions	1
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