[Mierfa Durgas]

My older fursona and my newer fursona, Zinnia and Grace. Grace is jealous of Zinnia, so for Halloween she decides to lock her in a cage and drop her into a boiling pot of acid. Ha ha...wait till I find out, Grace!
Zinnia, don't worry, if at least 10 people like this you'll be saved...
lol.
Anyways, I felt like doing something for Halloween, so I did this. Not very Halloweeny, huh?
Yeah, I'm new to the Oekaki, so I'm really bad . Any help? Yes, I know, my outlining is bad and the cage bars are HORRIBLE

Edit: Anybody? Anything? Advice? Likes? ANYONE???