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Red lined by varoujan

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Red lined

Postby varoujan » Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:11 am

I hope this is not too hard to understand xD

1.The muzzle is more short and sloped.
2.The ears are closer to the top of the head and more forward facing
3. the eye is less round.
4. The front legs are not so rounded at the top.
5. They should have a more rounded chest on the underside (I dont know if that makes sense. I hope it does...).
6. The hind legs are not so rounded on the front.
7. They don't really have a chest the way dogs and wolves do.
8. the back is slightly curved at the back

I also put in a quick sketch of a paw since they weren't in the picture.

I hope this helped c:
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While I slept you crept in and pulled the rug right out from under me
Then the rain stole away and took the parts that kept me functioning

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Re: Red lined

Postby Lions » Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:12 am

Yes, thank you!!
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