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Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3. by Nanuuk

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Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby Nanuuk » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:42 pm

This is for a competiton on FB.
I coloured in my old image because I needed insipration, so this oekaki has none of the old one in it^^'

I like the shading on this one, but I don't know if you people will.
The anatomy is correct, as far as I know. Feel free to correct me, however.

I'm hoping this will stay in intermediate, as I like this piece quite alot, ^^'
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby AmericanGirl2231 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:51 pm

it is good but beongs in the beginner and not the intermediate add more details to the horse and it will be intermediate
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby Prometheus » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:52 pm

Its fine. I think the muzzle was a bit...blocky. .-.
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby Nanuuk » Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:22 pm

AmericanGirl2231 wrote:it is good but beongs in the beginner and not the intermediate add more details to the horse and it will be intermediate


Most of my other drawings like this stay here, so I'm not really worried about detail to much. I do put quite a bit of detail into my work, but sometimes it doens't show as much, ^^'

SamTheSham wrote:Its fine. I think the muzzle was a bit...blocky. .-.


It's my own style so I'm not to worried about that. :3
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby MustangKnight » Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:26 pm

its legs need a more prominant fetlock joint
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby AmericanGirl2231 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:27 pm

okay but it is realy good
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby Nanuuk » Sat Aug 20, 2011 9:01 am

BurnNoticeChick wrote:its legs need a more prominant fetlock joint


It's my own style. I don't expect it to look real, and have perfect anatomy, <3.
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby childo » Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:24 am

I think it's generally awsome just maybe make the head a little bigger it kinda looks like a foals head on a mares body :P but apart from that I truely believe that intermediate is where this mare belongs
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Re: Shasta, a random mare in a field, <3.

Postby Nanuuk » Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:31 am

@childo: thank you^^' that really makes me look forewards when drawing, and not give up. :3
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