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My first cat drawing in Oekaki by ThePrimeWithin

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My first cat drawing in Oekaki

Postby ThePrimeWithin » Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:24 pm

You can commet but plz be nice about it
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Re: My first cat drawing in Oekaki

Postby fizzy-cats » Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:56 pm

The belly is a little too thin, as are the legs. Also, you can see a cat's hip when it's viewed from the side. A cat's rump slopes just the tiniest bit before becoming the tail. You may want to try messing with making smoother lines (this can be found on the same panel where you can control pen thickness).
On the upside, I love the design and the eye!
so many regrets, so little time

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