[TheCryingWolf]

Vent art. Didn't feel like doing shading sooo, yeah. Open to comments and crit.

Art (c) Me
Character (c) Me

[Klaora]

Hey there. Saw you were open to crit and I thought I may be able to help. ^^;

The thing that's bothering me the most is how, at least on my screen, the character is lost in the darkness. I can barely see the lines that define him/her and I'm having a hard time seeing a difference between the colors.
So lighten up that fur and make the blue sky a bit more pronounced. Even on a cloudy new-moon night, you can still see the stars. :3 Variation in color will help out a lot, I think. If you want a lot of darks, you need a few lights to REALLY bring it out to see the comparison.
Also, I just happened to see the rain on accident. Might want to bring that out a bit too, as it seems very important.
Try not to let all of your hard work get lost like that. :3 It's a real shame.

On the other hand, I really like how the fur and eye is really brought out to a near clashing point. It puts a lot of emphasis on those parts and is likely part of the reason of why the tears are so visible as it shifts my focus there.
Either way, very nice. Vent art has a tendency to come out well, I've noticed. :3 It does tend to stand out from your other original works in your gallery in my opinion. ^^

Good luck to you~

[TheCryingWolf]

Thanks so much! I'll definitely do it different next time. And the reason why her fur colors are dark is because their suppose to be. She's my fursona and I pretty much use her for most/all my vent art.