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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:09 pm

Oooo another species XD...I'd love to join..been looking for a strict rp as well..but..as you said no asking etc.
Also scientific names, their all latin. So if your looking for a good one..maybe Generalis lupum(Tribal Wolf) or vulpes Generalis (Tribal Fox)

But here are some examples of my rp posts...two on sight one off sight.

intro sized post: This was made in a Private rp seen here
Bright glowing white eyes stared from the shadows of a cave at the valley bellow. The creatures maw parted reviling bright white teeth and saber like fangs. The shiffling of some stones lead to a massive dark grey wolf exiting the darkness of the cave and to the edge of the cliff. The wind ruffling the females fur as she stared down over the tree line. Flicking one of her three tails she spread her massive wings and dives off the cliff.

The wind streaming over her fur, her hair flying behind her she closed her eyes and smiled. Finally, just before the edge of the treetops she flung her wings open. Pulling up sharply she skimmed the tops of the trees, her claws catching a few of the branches until she slowed to a normal flight speed. She hovered on the air currents, flapping her wings when needed. Soaring over the trees and into an open valley she behan hovering scenting the air for prey.

She was greeted by the scent of an alarmed elk, and blood. Landing on the ground with ease she sniffed the grass, looking for the trail of scent that the elk may have left. She raised her hear, her ears pointed twards the defiant bugle of the elk. She growled, snaraling so her fangs were visible. She wasn't angry that the elk may be dead, more of she lost out on an easy meal. None the less she tracked the trail to the place where the Elk had been killed. She pawed at the ground where the blood was to see how fresh it was before looking to the shadows of the forest where the drag marks lead. It was a male wolf, the creature who took down the elk. She flicked her tails wondering just how big this wolf was to be able to drag an elk. But she wasn't going to check it out, she didn't want to end up trapped in his territory since he knew it far better. Opening her wings she took to the air once more, landing on the branch of a tree not far away.


OMG ITS WARRIORS OF ISKET....my Warrior Nexus after a few days of the rp.
Nexus had not listen to the fullest exactly, having found a good tree to hide under and watch the battle. She watched in amazement as the warriors showed up, their claws and fangs making quick work of the entire scene. She pictured herself amongst the warriors, her fangs sunk into the dying flesh of a Kronador, her arming gleaming against the moonlight that had befallen the battle. She couldn't wait to wear her armor, small, but still strong.

Letting out a small yip of excitement as the warriors began removing their armor, she strode onto the now blood stained field. Lightly, she poked her paw at a dead Kronador and jumped back as soon as the paw made contact. She growled slightly moving back up and sniffing its dead corpse. She was curious, but quickly changed her interest. Sniffing at the ground, then pawing lightly at a yellowish tan object on the ground, she lifted a fang that was from one of the Kronador and held it in her mouth proudly. She walked over and picked up her sack, slipping the fang in its confines before returning with her tail down, tucked lightly in between her legs.

She was probably going to be in trouble..for being so far out. But to say the truth she only was trying to help Lyra get away. She didn't want to see Lyra end up as a snack, so she had to act. More then likely if she hadn't, the Kronador would have got away no problem, and Nexus would be left knowing she could have helped. But really she didn't like thinking on the past, she looked at what was now. And that was to get home, but she was tired, unable to get there fast. Holding her bag in her mouth she whimpered slightly trying to ask for some help, even if someone was just to carry her bag, she was tired..less weight lead to more energy.


AAAANNNNDD my off sight rp called thousand years of darkness...two XD its the 2n'd bit of the rp. This post was recent
Kuar had sat down and started reading a book when he managed to catch the first cracking of the tower. Out of curiosity he looked around, then..again crack!, getting to his feet he herd it again, but it was getting louder..more intense. Crack! CRack! CRACK! CRASH!!! scrrraaaaaapppeee, BANG! Woosh!(yay for sound effects!) Kuar ran to the nearest window finally realizing that the sound was coming from outside. His heart nearly stopped seeing the wake of the collapse of the tower. Everything in its path had been crushed! everything, but it wasn't until Kuar's eyes followed the trail that he realized just how serious its collapse had been.

It was then that Maria bolted over to the window and noticed the wreckage as well, and started panicking. Actually this was the first time Kuar had seen her panic, which intrigued him. But he had to push that aside, right now he needed to calm her down. He held his hand over one of his ears saying "Maria calm down dang it! your gonna burst my ear drum. I see it too!" He griped the side of Maria face and said "get dressed, I know your hurting, but the people are gonna need a safe place to go! we need to make it" His tail flicked back and forth behind him, though he wasn't showing it he was scared as to what happened. It was actually then that he realized something, something that should have struck strong in his mind as soon as he realized the tower had gone down.

RAIN! His eyes turned from the calm manner they were in to an almost fearful look. Anyone who saw this would know that he did love his daughter, unlike most peoples beliefs. He turned towards the window grabbing his sword of its wrack and climbed on the rail. He looked back at Maria briefly before saying "I have to find her maria, I have to find Rain!!, I'm sorry I have to go! now!!" At that He pushed off the window giving his massive wings a few good beats. He noticed Micah flying in their general direction. He knew the angle would be of some help, but not right now. Right now Kuar was more focused on finding Rain. Giving his wings a few goof flaps he gained altitude quickly, his eyes scanning the land for any signs that Rain may have gotten out of the tower. If it hadn't been for the flash of brown, and Snickerdoodle's distinctive shape barking seeming to bark at everything that moved, Kuar wouldn't have ever noticed her against the the ground where she had landed.

Folding his wings he dove, spiraling down. He could see the entire town was in panic. If Ironblood had developed a 2nd stronghold to fall back to the people would be fine!. But no the man hadn't thought that far ahead. Kuar pulled out of his dive right at the ground, enough where his tail actually sparked off the stones beneath him. Pulling back up suddenly almost right next to rain where she sat. Throwing the strap of his sword over his shoulder so he wouldn't have to carry the blade anymore. Kneeling by Rain's side with a look or worry in his eyes as he asked "are you alight? your bleeding" He actually was scared to touch rain despite his massive amount of worry for her. Finally after a few seconds of quietness he reached out and combed lightly though Rains hair to get the glass out. He didn't want her cutting herself anymore then she already was.


PS: If there is any...pg13 words in there i missed, message me ill change them.

Another PS:...i never realized i posted that big....
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby BPeppers » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:14 pm

I am awesome <3


.Joy. wrote:
Hearing the loud brrring! of the bell, Rose quickly slid out of her desk seat. She was in Miss Rani's class for Spanish. Her teacher wasn't too bad. Rose considered for a moment that the class might even be fun-if it had been anything other than spanish. She sighed, and hoisted her backpack over a shoulder.

Looking around, she saw no one that she was particularly friends with- which bummed her quite a bit. She was usually the talkative one that was always getting in trouble in class for not being able to shut off. She'd usually role her eyes and start fiddling with her pencil after she was yelled it, half from annoyance, half from embarrassment. Miss Rani was the only teacher Rose actually kind of liked; she was convinced that every other teacher hated her, even if it was not the case.

With one last glance at the students in the class, Rose turned and began to walk towards the door of the classroom. Nodding goodbye to Miss Rani, she twisted her way through the halls that were crowded by other students, trying to make her way towards the common room where the rest of the Circle would hang out.



.Joy. wrote:
Lucas stared into the horizon of the setting sun. Its rays were orange and yellow, allowing it to stand out boldly against the clear blue of the sky. Lucas sighed. Though he had seen more beautiful, the moon, for example, this was certainly calming. A month before, his father had been murdered, letting only him and his Aunt survive. His Aunt was a lowly wolf, tattered and burned in the worst ways possible. Though, she was not brave. She never had been. Now she sat around and moped in the big husk of an outgrown tree, mumbling unkind words to him whenever he would pass by. That was all she would ever do, so he'd left her. He loved his Aunt, but sticking around was not an appealing idea.

Lucas sighed, not wanting to revisit the moment very badly. He'd never known his mother, so that kind of hurt did not linger, but after his father's death, caused by a wolf he did not know, it annoyed him to see his Aunt so... Dreary and scared. Of nothing. When he had needed help. They'd left many wolves in his pack the day that his father'd been murdered, including Angeline. Oh, Angeline. She was quite the awkward one. They'd never connected, but he'd found her amusing the days that he'd seen her. She'd claim she loved him, and Lucas had returned the feeling with a warm heart. They were not related, it'd been his father's close friend's pup, only a couple months old. He'd had love for her because she was a puppy.

Lucas turned then, abandoning his thoughts, and returning to the woods. He felt the warm of that orange sunset he'd been so amazed by earlier on his back for a moment longer, but left his body cold when he then returned to the shadows. Low and behold, there was barely any snow in the greatly covered woods. The tree's hammock-like tops made sure of that. He shook his pelt rapidly, both trying to shake off the snow, and some of his emotions, possibly. He trudged forward, but the wet and heavy snow had not been causing his shoulders to slump. No, that was his mind.

Suddenly, he heard something. Something like dragging. And there were voices that followed. His ears pricked, and he followed the sound, desperate to see what was so close. A low growling rumbled in his throat. He'd scented this smell before. Wolves. Finally reaching the end of the East side of the oddly squared forest, he peeked out from between the blanketing trees. Sure enough, there were wolves there. They were moving very slowly, for their species, at least. He figured there were fifteen or twenty of them, a small pack or a clan he supposed. Curious, but protective, he decided to follow, but only from the shadows of the forest.



.Joy. wrote:
Rosepaw sat up quickly, but she relaxed as she saw her new mentor. She dipped her head and stood, grinning widely. "Hey Bramblethicket!" she meowed, then stopped herself. He was to be respected, not treated like her best buddy. "I-I mean, yes, I'm ready." Pathetically, she laughed.

Rowanstar looked up, and smiled warmly at his apprentice. Yes, she had done good. Her prey looked the size of a boulder! That could help very well with the Clan. Though he was only 14 moons old, Rowanstar, formally Rowanwood, had been forced to be taken on as Clan leader. The last battle had destroyed all the Clans greatly, and he had the choice of choosing one Clan to restart. Surprisingly, it had been RoseClan, instead of the legendary ThunderClan that once stood. But this was his home, these were his people. All the cats that had been here he had found wandering, yet he felt all of them as family. "Yes," he meowed kindly, snapping out of his irregular faze. "Great job, Willowpaw! We'll have to train sometime soon." He paused. "Be ready tomorrow at dawn." He smiled kindly at her.


The last one is a bit old. ^^

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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby hotdoge » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:23 pm

@Tundra~
Thanks for reading all the way through. ^^ I'm not uber strict with that one, as long as you don't annoy the hell outta me. .3. Feel free to post some RP examples, if you'd like.

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Oh, now I feel even more like a RP fail. It's not often that I post that long. I usually just try to sound as fluent and intelligent as possible, without going all out. =w=
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:27 pm

*stares at her examples* wow...and they aren't even my biggest...though i should post an example of my smaller ones....
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby BPeppers » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:30 pm

@zets- I love fluent people 8D. Sometimes after RPing for a long time I just give up and post a paragraph. It can be a pain after a couple months of that long of posts. ^^

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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby hotdoge » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:40 pm

@Tundra~
|D Awesome examples. Me gusta. .3.
*Notices scientific names*
Ooh. Even more gusta. But I like them both. And now I can't decide. TwT


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I generally keep my posts between 3-10 sentences, so they're usually pretty uniform. But I make up for the shortness with my use of big words and INTELLEKS.
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:47 pm

I would go with Generalis lupum(Tribal Wolf) since this seems more like a wolf race. But if its more fox go with the other....i can even get one for Coyote XD...gotta love Latin the language of science
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby hotdoge » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:59 pm

Actually, when I created them, I was thinking about a combination of a cat, a wolf, and a fox, so Nyx have aspects of all three. >.> I'm so weird.
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:04 pm

its not weird XD my race named Isnaroh is basically the Bovidae family combined with wolves...or wolves with horns XD

hmmm...names...names....Generalis Suspendisse ipsum is Tribal Fox Cat...lol

use this to mess around http://translate.google.com/#en|la|

PS: i keep wanting to put heads on those...headless bodies XD then find something else to fill the space where the heads are XD. Guess they just look..incomplete
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Re: New Species Ref Sheet

Postby hotdoge » Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:14 pm

Aaaaaweeesoooomeee! >D

Yus. .3. Heh, I always use translate, too.

Weeelllll... I got lazy. There was already the close-up of the heads so I basically said 'lolno,' then posted it. :B
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