by Charlie13 » Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:26 am
This is what I hate about people like you: You say that you can't draw animals and then you produce amazing pieces like this!
Get it into your head! THIS IS UH-MAZING!
Oh yeah! I said it! It's a great piece and you deserve the right to have the thought in your brain that you are fantastic at drawing animals!I love it and it should be in intermediate.
Charlie xox
The Pirate Ship
As I sleep alone upon the sea shore,
I dream of a pirate ship taking me forth.
They thought me a vagabond, a robber, a thief,
And so I was made Commander-in-Chief.
I was no longer dreaming, this life became real.
I’d become a true legend with a cutlass of steel.
My treacherous mission was one to admire.
The buccaneer, Blackbeard I was to acquire.
The Americans, his captors would not set him loose.
My plan was to save him from the hangman’s noose.
As Blackbeard, the pirate hung from the rope,
I sent my blade flying, to slash it with hope.
I had finally accomplished my dangerous goal,
The captain awarded me with a flag on a pole.
And then I awoke once again on the shore.
With the flag lying next to me, was I a pirate? An outlaw?