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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Psythen » Tue Jun 07, 2011 10:13 pm

Thanks for the nice comments! <333

I'll fix the tail next time I edit, thanks for the crit. :3
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby cek00 » Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:51 pm

i agree intermediate.

bye the way do youo make a background first or last?
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Psythen » Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:02 am

cek00 wrote:i agree intermediate.

bye the way do youo make a background first or last?


Thanks!

And I've done both. I usually go through several backgrounds. Not sure if I'm sticking with this one yet. xD;

Why? :o
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby cek00 » Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:09 am

well i have the most troble with backgrounds it always leaves the character with white around him/her and im not so sure i under stand how layers work on a normal picture
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Psythen » Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:14 am

cek00 wrote:well i have the most troble with backgrounds it always leaves the character with white around him/her and im not so sure i under stand how layers work on a normal picture


It takes time and patience! You've gotta start somewhere.

And I'm not the best at explaining, but I'm sure you come find some written explanation or even a video that could tell you how layers work ;)
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby cek00 » Wed Jun 08, 2011 9:09 am

thanks
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Vargulf » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:17 am

This is very good Psythen you are getting better ^_^.
Crit: You need to darken the shadow on the front leg just a little more so it gives it more depth and just like some else said in some places you need to round your smudging to give it more depth as well like on the chest area as one. Other than that it is awesome!
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:19 am

Intermadate!
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Psythen » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:55 am

@ Marwari, thanks for the crit! You're always so helpful with my drawings. <3

@Aysan1, Thank you! :)
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Re: Grey Skies in Paradise

Postby Vargulf » Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:36 am

your always welcome ^_^ I'm still learning myself. But I learn from a great artist Equid she tells me a lot of great things.
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