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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Daggett » Sat Jun 04, 2011 6:47 am

Beautiful anatomy- I'd make the withers a bit more pronounced, but that might be a characteristic of Marawis. The eye is a bit small, but it still looks really nice.

Really love the shading, too. And your character is stunning <3
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Pierce My Black Veil » Sat Jun 04, 2011 6:56 am

Brilliant picture :D
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby horsy1050 » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:16 pm

~thunderclan lover~ wrote:Brilliant picture :D


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Daggett wrote:Beautiful anatomy- I'd make the withers a bit more pronounced, but that might be a characteristic of Marawis. The eye is a bit small, but it still looks really nice.

Really love the shading, too. And your character is stunning <3


Thank you, and thanks for the pointers.
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Fat Unicorn » Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:11 am

*faints*
I love it!
It has great posture, and it seems to be looking boldly up at a threat. The tack and positioning just adds to the fantasy and the bold colours you used.
But also, when your looking at a picture of a horse, there's little wrinkles pulling forward on the top of the eye, making it look interested/frowning/concerned. Maybe do that next time?
Can't stress how much I love the blank expression on the horse's face.
Ears are done perfectly, as well.
Overall.... it rox mai sox! 8D
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby -Obsidian » Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:55 am

Perhaps shade the scapular and the "elbow" (sorry, i don't know what it's called D:) more to pronounce it better? Lovely as always though.
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby wibeke » Sun Jun 05, 2011 5:20 am

Ooh, I love marwaris. Their ears are so awesome, somewhere between majestic and cute.
I wish I could draw horses like you, you have their anatomy down so well and you seem to know where all the muscles are placed and such. I'm really not seeing the nose fail that you were talking about, and the background looks really pretty.

Only tiny critique is the ears. You have them almost perfect, I think, but in the photos they curve down a bit more sharply at the tip and are pointed almost downward.
Depends on the horse though, I think. It's certainly not as pronounced in every horse, so maybe that's just your character. In which case ignore the whole bottom half of the post. xD
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Howl For Me » Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:14 am

This is beautiful, I love Marwaris<3

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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Malevolent » Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:36 am

no love button??!?!?
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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby horsy1050 » Sun Jun 05, 2011 8:50 pm

Rejected Artist wrote:*faints*
I love it!
It has great posture, and it seems to be looking boldly up at a threat. The tack and positioning just adds to the fantasy and the bold colours you used.
But also, when your looking at a picture of a horse, there's little wrinkles pulling forward on the top of the eye, making it look interested/frowning/concerned. Maybe do that next time?
Can't stress how much I love the blank expression on the horse's face.
Ears are done perfectly, as well.
Overall.... it rox mai sox! 8D


I'm no good at horse emptions XD and to be honest when I drew it I didn't really focus on an emption as such. But I will definately work on it. Thank you.

bluestar123 wrote:Perhaps shade the scapular and the "elbow" (sorry, i don't know what it's called D:) more to pronounce it better? Lovely as always though.


Yeah, I need to get round to that at some stage. Thanks.

wibeke wrote:
Ooh, I love marwaris. Their ears are so awesome, somewhere between majestic and cute.
I wish I could draw horses like you, you have their anatomy down so well and you seem to know where all the muscles are placed and such. I'm really not seeing the nose fail that you were talking about, and the background looks really pretty.

Only tiny critique is the ears. You have them almost perfect, I think, but in the photos they curve down a bit more sharply at the tip and are pointed almost downward.
Depends on the horse though, I think. It's certainly not as pronounced in every horse, so maybe that's just your character. In which case ignore the whole bottom half of the post. xD


You have a point, I'll fix that asap. And I do like peoples comments and they do help me to improve (even if I do change it on that image I bear it in mind for the next image.

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Re: Marwari-ness

Postby Darkmoony » Sun Jun 05, 2011 8:52 pm

Excuse me, I'm just wondering, is the Marwari a made up breed based off the Kathiawari horse?
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