[Lonewolf199152]

Heres a sketch i did. First drawing ive ever done with an actual landscape background
Ill probably color this later. Im pretty happy with how this turned out!

EDIT:
Finished. Might go back in and fix a few things but overall im done.

COMMENTS ARE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED!

[Neara]

Woah, really cool!!! It reminds me of an actual coloring book
Great Job!

[Lonewolf199152]

Woah, really cool!!! It reminds me of an actual coloring book
Great Job!

Thank you

[Lonewolf199152]

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[Sunny.Cat]

Oh this looks really cool C: Are you looking for any critique on it or no? I don't want to give it where it's not being looked for ouo;

[Lonewolf199152]

Oh this looks really cool C: Are you looking for any critique on it or no? I don't want to give it where it's not being looked for ouo;

Oh Yes of course. Im looking to improve. Just remember its my first attempt at a background lol.
And please be nice about it cause i know how some people are rude

[Sunny.Cat]

Don't worry, I'm not looking to tear you apart. ouo; Just some simple stuff I'm going to mention. C:
The lineart for the dragon looks really nice but the coloring of the picture and the shading takes away from it. The color of the dragon is really similar to the color of the mountains and the rock it's sitting on, so it makes it sort of difficult to tell where the dragon ends and where it begins. The markings themselves look nice, but they're so bright that the contrast distracts from the actual drawing.
Also, for a first attempt at a background this is definitely good (better than my first attempt) .__. But you want to make sure you're not making it so that the background is the main focus of the picture. The way you used the lineart to create the details in the background (in the mountains, (smaller) rocks, & trees especially) distracts from the dragon because the dragon is made from the same lines and even less of them. Rely on shading to create the ridges in the mountain, not the lineart. C: Also, you want to avoid awkward placement of objects, when I was looking at the stream for a second I thought it was coming from the dragon's nose because of where it began.
This picture is really nice but there's stuff that takes away from how nice it can be. I don't want to write an essay, so if you're looking for more critique on anything just PM me. C:

[Lonewolf199152]

Don't worry, I'm not looking to tear you apart. ouo; Just some simple stuff I'm going to mention. C:
The lineart for the dragon looks really nice but the coloring of the picture and the shading takes away from it. The color of the dragon is really similar to the color of the mountains and the rock it's sitting on, so it makes it sort of difficult to tell where the dragon ends and where it begins. The markings themselves look nice, but they're so bright that the contrast distracts from the actual drawing.
Also, for a first attempt at a background this is definitely good (better than my first attempt) .__. But you want to make sure you're not making it so that the background is the main focus of the picture. The way you used the lineart to create the details in the background (in the mountains, (smaller) rocks, & trees especially) distracts from the dragon because the dragon is made from the same lines and even less of them. Rely on shading to create the ridges in the mountain, not the lineart. C: Also, you want to avoid awkward placement of objects, when I was looking at the stream for a second I thought it was coming from the dragon's nose because of where it began.
This picture is really nice but there's stuff that takes away from how nice it can be. I don't want to write an essay, so if you're looking for more critique on anything just PM me. C:

Yes i get what your saying.
My whole idea for it was to make the dragon a little camoflauge with the background since he was prowling and my orginal idea was to put snow on the mountains but...yea lol didnt go for that Thats why his markings were white.
But i might go in later and fix it up or just start over since this is a first drawing
XD Never really noticed the stream coming from his nose. I though i drew more of the mountain their but i guess i didnt

EDIT:
But thank you for the critique
Gives me something to really practice at

[Sunny.Cat]

No problem at all ouo And okay I get that C:

[Lonewolf199152]

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