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FOR Roszlee by aBisto

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FOR Roszlee

Postby aBisto » Thu May 12, 2011 8:05 am

woooooooooo
mler background.I really need sleep, do you guys know that i only got a c in my business mock? that shows how tired i am..i usually get higher. i reckeon I'm rambling. i really need sleep. CAN PEOPLE please pleasse give me criticism on the horse's anatomy? i really want to improve, and i did this with no references.

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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby Chasing Dreams » Thu May 12, 2011 8:06 am

wow very pretty!! You did an amazing job!!
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby aBisto » Thu May 12, 2011 8:21 am

thankyou :)
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Postby klaoud » Thu May 12, 2011 8:23 am

That's really incredible!...get some sleep!
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby aBisto » Fri May 13, 2011 4:50 am

I did ;) Don't think it helped much though :( My thoughts are still scrambled...
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby Roszlee » Sat May 14, 2011 5:41 am

Wow! Thank you very much this is amazing! ;) I don't have a page for him yet, but I keep it posted...


About the anatomy, its really good! I would say possibly a bit longer legs and a shorter body, but other than that, it's perfect!
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby aBisto » Sat May 14, 2011 7:12 am

Thank you very much :)
I made the body a bit longer than my original sketch, it was too short XD
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby west , » Sat May 14, 2011 8:36 am

the mane and tail have AMAZING shading/highlights, i can only really draw properly on paper. Background is AWESOME.
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⊰ Somewhere behind the rider you've вᴇcoмᴇ,
the hours of ᴘᴙʌcтɪcᴇ you've put in, the coaches that have ᴘυsнᴇᴅ yoυ,
the fences you've нɪт, the bones you've вᴙoκᴇɴ, the hard falls you've тʌκᴇɴ,
the loɴɢ ᴅɪsтʌɴcᴇ , the sнoᴙт ᴅɪsтʌɴcᴇ, the cнɪᴘ, the sтᴙɪᴅᴇs,
the ᴇqυɪтʌтɪoɴ, the sᴡᴇʌт, the тᴇʌᴙs, the вlooᴅ, the вlɪsтᴇᴙs,
the ᴙɪᴘᴘᴇᴅ jᴇʌɴs, the ᴡool jʌcκᴇтs on 100 degree sυммᴇᴙ ᴅʌys,
the lʌмᴇ horse, the cᴙʌzy horse, the "ʌᴙᴇ yoυ sᴇᴙɪoυs?" horse, and ᴇvᴇᴙyтнɪɴɢ in between...
soмᴇᴡнᴇᴙᴇ behind all this is the little girl who fᴇll ɪɴ lovᴇ with the нoᴙsᴇ,
the sᴘoᴙт, and the ɪᴅᴇʌ and ɴᴇvᴇᴙ looκᴇᴅ вʌcκ. ⊱

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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby Direbolt » Sat May 14, 2011 10:22 am

This is really good! If you want critisizm... I think that 1 leg is a bit too high. But that could be just me... GOOD JOB :clap:
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Re: FOR Roszlee

Postby Equid Phantasm » Sat May 14, 2011 4:42 pm

Heya, you asked for anatomy crits... see my beginner pintabian (Should have been intermediate but I'm new).

Every horse of any color has this wierd rounded high light that goes from belly up to back and then down the leg and up to the hip, it's on every horse and/or pony I have ever seen.

I love the pose but I think the joints need a little work and the body is a little long. (Measure the head, on most horses the body is 1 head plus just a bit longer. Check some reference photos. Arabians are easy to find on the internet and for shadows, check out hughesarabians.com where there are tons of photos of black arabians which really show the details of every joint and musculature. The background worked well with the grays of the horse.

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