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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:40 am

It just looks really pokable! :D Everytime i come back to this post i wanna poke it more and more... Poke! there we go :'D

It's so realistic. Hmmf. xD
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:52 am

I'm glad! I WAS going for realistic after all <3
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby goinggreen » Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:31 pm

This doesn't even look like a drawing! It looks like something on like a...wolf sim game. You know, like a video game? It's AMAZING!!!
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:41 pm

Now that I look at it- it does! reminds me of Wolf Quest. I'm really glad you think it's amazing! ^w^
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:46 pm

ha! i know what it reminds me of, apart from the fact that the fur is grey, in twilight/ new moon can't remember which one, the close up of jacob when bella first sees him as a wolf.

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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Come Ask Lilly » Sun May 01, 2011 3:07 am

This looks GREAT! I love eyes, and my standards for them are kind of high. I love your lighting, and the overall effect was magnificent. Really I think the only thing you messed up at all was the basic outline, and even those mistakes are minor.

(Oh, just to let you know, I am what is known as a grammar nazi - it's spelled 'irk,' not 'urk'.)
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sun May 01, 2011 7:39 am

GAAAAAAAHHHHHH TWILIGHT STRIKES AGAIN!!!!!! Seriously... There always has to be a comment about twilight!

Anyways, I'm glad I didn't make that many mistakes- other than my spelling. Haha. I know how irk is really spelt, but even so, I don't know why, but I spell it urk.
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sun May 01, 2011 9:15 am

Hahahaha i don't normally relate to twilight with stuff. But i had to do that :D
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Squishy Fishy » Sun May 01, 2011 11:21 am

WOW MUCH BETTER THAN MINE
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby MaineiacJay » Tue May 03, 2011 3:18 pm

hope you dont mind cunstructive criticism from me =)

first, i LOVE the pupil and the iris, you did an amazing job on that part, better than i could do =)

however, there are some problems with the fur, as well as some proportions and shape.

first, the fur. you generally have the right texture and shades and you almost (so close!) have the directions right. the biggest i see is on the left side, the fur doesnt really flow together as it should. as well as the direction under the eye isnt going the right way, it needs to be more angled to the right.

the shape of the entire eye is a little off as well, its a tad too stretched out and it has too much of a diamond shape to it. here is an eye i did, its a dogs eye, this should give you a better reference to the shape. this photo should also give you a good idea of fur, although i kinda gave up and left it a little sketchy... http://maineac92.deviantart.com/art/Eye-207363562

and below is my reference photo for the eye drawing. the image is huge, so you can zoom all the way in (click to zoom once, then click again to view at full size). its the perfect image to see the flow of fur and even the smallest details. hope it helps! http://maineac92.deviantart.com/#/d3dz3me

im still impressed by that iris! amazing color choice as well!
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