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Wolf Eye by geinkotsu

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Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:37 pm

It is an entry I made for a contest to draw a realistic eye. I think I did really good on the iris and pupil itself- as well as the reflection and such. But the fur... it still urks me. Constructive critisism would be very useful! And the iris may or may not be correct. I did not use refference (which may have been my downfall).
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Fri Apr 29, 2011 10:45 pm

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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 3:44 am

Is it really that good?? <3
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sat Apr 30, 2011 3:49 am

yeah the furs not that bad either :D if you put a bit more detail in, allthough not to much. I dunno but the eyes is amazing!
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:17 am

Yeah, some of the fur spaces look a little empty. But I have edited the drawing, originally, like seven times just to get the fur right. I'm fed up with it. I'm not good with close ups to fur. But It seems I am great with the actual eye, everyone seems to think so.
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:50 am

the fur is awesome too, just on the right hand side at the edge of the picture you should carry on the lines :D you have skills on the eye though ;p
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 5:02 am

I see what you mean about the edges. Thankyou for the advice!
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby Hae » Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:30 am

No problem. It really is awesome, i have the urge to poke it :D
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Re: Wolf Eye

Postby geinkotsu » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:05 am

Someone probably already did poke it! The eye is already watering (mostly because of fear, but w/e. Dun ruin the fun <3)
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