[-Stormy-]

Well.. this drawing kind of confuses me XD. This is Snow, my fursona, and she is sort of spaced- out and sadish.. That stuff that is coming from the sky is snow, and it is actually random squiggles. I like the drawing and the anatomy of Snow! Please comment and criticize, although no one probably will XD. Hopefully!! Do not steal Snow, my fursona, because she belongs to me ! Please comment or criticize and have a blessed day!!
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[InsomniacFox]

Nice I like the whole sketchy shading 83

Some things you could work on;
the paws. Their kinda spread out an make the paws appear really flattened.
the neck. Tehre really isn't one there, so you might want to add one :3
the body. It's kinda bulky, and makes your fursona look a bit fat. ^^;

Other than that, I love your style <3

[mumzy]

I agree with BloodSoul about the neck, but I also thin the head is a bit too small for the body. I understand she is hunkering down which is hard to draw, But I do agree with extending the neck. As for everything else, it really depends on your sense of style.

[-Stormy-]

@Bloodsoul: I agree, she does look a bit fat XD, but I meant for her fur to sort of be sticking out and stuff.. C; I am sort of in the process in making a new style of paws, and I actually meant for them to look like that, lol. I know the neck is off, and I may or may not ( probably won't ) make a longer neck, I just think it looks right.. Thank you so much for your comment!!
@Mumzy: The head is a little small, I agree, but since she is so puffy (XD) that I think that it looks sort of nice. Thank you for your comment!!
Thanks both of you for your comments!!