[KingDiesel]

there isn't much of a description other than this is another animal in Glacemour called a Thyabaiya. she hand crafted a necklace that though will raise the chances of death from disease, will lower the chances of old age death. the reason she made this was because she didn't want to be the last of her kind, (which started dying out from interbreeding from an non-native species) I don't feel like typing all 659085968596950695069506950 backstory parts, so lets just say this is a sighting of her from a Seiki in the Sirive clan. Seikies and Restyties once worshiped thyabaiyas like *gods*, and now the Sirive tribe is doing everything it can to create a mage via a potential mother in Spring, to get her attention, and bless them. . . in mind that is. Thyabaiyas have been worshiped as a sign of 'peace', therefore both Restyties and Seikies have been at hate for eachother in a never ending battle to be blessed. this particular one however didn't have the intentions of creating the necklace to bring peace upon them, but rather to not be the one to let her kind go extinct.





critique her, I tell you!

[KingDiesel]

GUYS GIVE ME CRITIQUE FOR ONCE OF THIS SCARY THING THAT HAS THE QUALITY OF A WIKIHOW IMAGE!!!!!!!

[w h a t]

GUYS GIVE ME CRITIQUE FOR ONCE OF THIS SCARY THING THAT HAS THE QUALITY OF A WIKIHOW IMAGE!!!!!!!

I'll try?
The falling snow is the first thing that stands out. it's a little chunky and blurred with not a lot of depth to it, so maybe some lighter brighter flecks to give a "front" "middle" and "back" in the future?
The second thing would be the creature's feet and impact points. Is he/she/it light enough to walk on snow without disturbing it like an elf? Is it not that thick and supposed to have land or rocks or something that they're standing on? There's no real distinct detail to show that it's got any with in the snow or even that it's standing in or on anything rather than just floating there. defining rough edges there or giving the illusion of their "paws" sinking a bit into the snow will help
Also it kinda looks like they're kinda just behind a blurry screen the way the snow in the air looks without any amount of snow on the creature itself. They look like they have freshly popped up out of a nice and cozy mountain cave 2 feet away.

the creature itself is very handsome and natural looking :3

[KingDiesel]

GUYS GIVE ME CRITIQUE FOR ONCE OF THIS SCARY THING THAT HAS THE QUALITY OF A WIKIHOW IMAGE!!!!!!!

I'll try?
The falling snow is the first thing that stands out. it's a little chunky and blurred with not a lot of depth to it, so maybe some lighter brighter flecks to give a "front" "middle" and "back" in the future?
The second thing would be the creature's feet and impact points. Is he/she/it light enough to walk on snow without disturbing it like an elf? Is it not that thick and supposed to have land or rocks or something that they're standing on? There's no real distinct detail to show that it's got any with in the snow or even that it's standing in or on anything rather than just floating there. defining rough edges there or giving the illusion of their "paws" sinking a bit into the snow will help
Also it kinda looks like they're kinda just behind a blurry screen the way the snow in the air looks without any amount of snow on the creature itself. They look like they have freshly popped up out of a nice and cozy mountain cave 2 feet away.

the creature itself is very handsome and natural looking :3

thank you, finally some critique :')

this sounds like a bit of a critique 'block' but bare with me here-

I can definitely agree that the snow is terrifying, like really really bad, I was sort of messing around not knowing what I was doing, but I can see what you mean by like 'depth'; the snow around her should probably not be blurry. . .

um. and the tracks thing erfgfchgchnghg I probably should of done more 'piles' surrounding said tracks because these things are giant in the story. . . if one walked by, the tracks would definitely make a mark. . .

I appreciate your critique, and welcome it with open arms! thank you!

[w h a t]

i tried :,3 💕 glad to know it's appreciated
i really like the work, the critter is very interesting and i love the bit of lore given with it!